Friday, May 25, 2007

Something by Shakespeare

I couldn't resist writing after reading these two lines in a sonnet by SHAKESPEARE.

But if the while I think of thee, dear friend,
All losses are restored, and sorrows end.

The corrected form--

But if the while I think on thee, dear friend,
All losses are restored, and sorrows end.

I thank Chai Mimi for correcting me.
After all, it is the work of Shakespeare

2 comments:

Chia Mimi said...

Something by Chia, a Shakespeare lover.
(She couldn't resist to correct)

But if the while I think ON thee, dear friend,
All losses are restor'd and sorrows end.


~Sonnet number xxx~
And the 'xxx' stand for 30 *smile*

Chia Mimi said...

Indeed and we have to be happy to be able to read him!

Thanks, you're a sport ;)

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